Tuesday, June 15, 2010

Olivia's Dunedin Thoughts

YOUNG LEADERS

We jump of the bus with excitement. We enter the theater, we take our seats Justin Vaughan is speaking he is a doctor and a cricket player then he finishes. Mark Ingills up next, mark Ingills is amazing climber he has climbed mount Cook and Everest, away goes Mark Ingills. Then my favourite guest speaker Nick Tuitasi goes up, he is my favourite because just his life I loved how he told us how one minute he is a gang member then a police officer. But that day was not to

miss!!!! By Olivia

4 comments:

  1. Awesome writing olivia and I liked how you said what mark did
    Callum

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  2. It's great to see your comments on the writing Callum, but you need to make sure that you use your reader courtesy and include full stops and capital letters.
    Mark
    Olivia
    Keep an eye on this.
    :-)

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  3. Hi Olivia, great story I really liked reading about it.
    From Kiera. :)

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  4. Nice work Olivia great recount.
    McKeely:-}

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