Tuesday, June 15, 2010

Adam's Dunedin Thoughts

The museum

Well what a long day after the magnificent speakers and the incredible art work we got off the bus again grabbed our bags and setoff into the amazing BIG museum. I walked into the museum we went up the stairs through discovery world up more stairs we put our bags down we had a play then we had pizza for tea. Then we did people of the world idol the we went back and had supper. Then we went to sleep.

By Adam

8 comments:

  1. Wow, go Adam,
    I like how you put all of the description on the Museum!
    You are one of a kind! :)

    from Ellie!:)

    P.S thanks for putting a comment on my writing, you are a GEM!

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  2. Scott here
    Hi Adam, I like how you said what you had for tea. You explained it well.

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  3. Hi Adam, you could put a little bit more in your writing but apart from that I really enjoyed it.
    From Kiera. :)

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  4. Hi Adam Harry here I liked how you used descriptive words.
    Harry.

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  5. Short, but really good.
    Callum H

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  6. Nice writing Adam I love the infomation in your work.
    McKeely:-}

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