Tuesday, June 15, 2010

McKeely's Dunedin Thoughts

The Dunedin Trip

At 6:15 on Monday the 31st of May we were getting ready for the experience

of a kind, we were going to Young Leaders in Dunedin. When we got there

we listened to six speakers called: Allison Shanks, Rob Harley, Mark Ingill,

Nick Tuitassi, Matt Gibb and Justin Vaughn my personal favourite was

Nick Tuitassi he amazed me with what he said. After the conference we

went for an art lesson with John Newamagen we did Ykiyo-e Japanese

art and drew a portrait then went over in ink and coloured in with dye.

Later we went to the museum into Discovery World. We played and did

an activity called People of the World where we

Sang, made a flag, dressed somebody up. Later on we had

pizza for tea. We slept in Discovery World. The next day at 7:00 am

we were ready for action. We talked about the butterflies and room 8

did an activity. After that we went to the Tropicial rain forest we saw

lots of animals. After that we got on the bus and went to Moana Pool

and played a game of flippa-ball. We had a few stops we got back to

school at 5:00pm. We were all really tired but we had fun.

THANK-YOU MRS HUGHES YOU ROCK :-}

By McKeely

8 comments:

  1. Hi it's Shannon
    I've read your writing and it is amazing you talked allot about the
    speakers. It was an amazing story to read.

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  2. We were actually up at 5am Mckeely...you were rearing to go...us not so much! Great to read your story and know that you got so much out of this trip. Its fab that even now you can recall things you learnt fantastic memory for you! Huge thanks to Mrs Hughes for the time and effort she put into making this trip happen and to all the wonderful parents who gave up there time to..was great to know my girl was in great hands!!!
    Love Mum xo

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  3. It's great how you added every little detail to make a great piece of writing.
    Callum

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  4. Hi mckeely !!!
    Great story, i like your ukiyo-e protrait.
    The butterflies were cool,arent they.
    By Shinikka !!!

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  5. Great story Mckeely I really enjoyed reading it.
    From Kiera :)

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  6. Amazing McKeely, I really enjoyed it.:)!!!!!! Brayden:)

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  7. Thanks for all the comments guys. Awesome they are I really appreciate the effort.
    Thank-you
    McKeely

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