The museum
Well what a long day after the magnificent speakers and the incredible art work we got off the bus again grabbed our bags and setoff into the amazing BIG museum. I walked into the museum we went up the stairs through discovery world up more stairs we put our bags down we had a play then we had pizza for tea. Then we did people of the world idol the we went back and had supper. Then we went to sleep.
By Adam
GO ME!!!
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Wow, go Adam,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put all of the description on the Museum!
You are one of a kind! :)
from Ellie!:)
P.S thanks for putting a comment on my writing, you are a GEM!
Scott here
ReplyDeleteHi Adam, I like how you said what you had for tea. You explained it well.
Hi Adam, you could put a little bit more in your writing but apart from that I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteFrom Kiera. :)
Hi Adam Harry here I liked how you used descriptive words.
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Short, but really good.
ReplyDeleteCallum H
Great job Adam. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteMcKeely
Nice writing Adam I love the infomation in your work.
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